Feedback from our blog

We got our feedback sheet from the rest of our group. They were mostly positive but from looking at other peoples blogs i see there is much work that can be done to improve ours. I have decided to do work at home, look at other peoples blogs and use their outline to improve ours and hopefully increase our final mark for planning.

We got an average mark of around 17 which is in the profficiant planning section, our aim is to get it into the excellent planning stage.

Main things we need to do

- write up the final idea more effectively
- pictures of locations
- improve call sheet
- music video analysis
- things that are going well or ar not going well.
- props, mise en scene etc....

look at other blogs and use them to help improve ours.